Blog #6
My
argument in this paper is to lower the national drinking age from 21 to 18. I
want to acknowledge the additional benefits that we currently do not have because
the drinking age is at 21 such as personal safety. Many statistics are also
added to support these claims. Since this class focuses on American culture, I wanted
to make points in my paper that drinking and alcohol is a large part of our
culture. I also acknowledge that many other European countries and the fact
that they let persons drink at an age of 18 and the benefits that these
countries experience having the drinking age at 18 rather than 21. Currently persons under
21 are prohibited from drinking in bars, restaurants, and other events which causes
them to drink in unsupervised places; another persistent problem. The controversy of
Alcohol consumption for persons at the age of 18 versus 21 is a persistent
dilemma in this country.
I
make this argument by comparing and contrasting the costs and benefits of where
the current drinking age is and where it should stand. In this paper I argue
that the drinking age should be lowered to 18 years of age.Full Thesis Statement:The
national drinking age should be lowered to 18 years of age for the following
reasons; youth would drink in a more responsible manner, the drinking age set at
21 invades personal rights for persons over the age of 18, it would lower drinking
over-consumption on college campuses, and would be a good move for the economy.
I am going to review Casons Blog post.
I read your paper in class and believe that you formed your side very well with many facts and examples.Your thesis is clearly stated and your main argument, that kids are drinking in unsupervised areas is clearly seen, maybe giving a more in depth scenario of the bad effects of drinking without supervision would be beneficial!
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